In drug or guns I have learn how to producing and evaluating critical writing. This topic is preparation to me for assignment 3. In this unit, I have to write critical review and have chance to criticize fellow friends writing. From that I have learn how to evaluate critical writing. To make sure that my evaluating in the right path, there is guideline provided in the way to complete a critical evaluation.
In this unit I have to evaluate current issue which is drugs or guns. I have to evaluate the text based on 10 element that I already learn before this after that, I will exchange my evaluation with my friends and we will mark based on criteria ion the critical guidelines.
The difficulty that I have to face during finishing this assessment is the content because the writer not only include drug and guns issue but also about corruption and violence. Beside that, in part positioning I had confuse to position people because there are a lot of people that are mention in this text.
Tuesday, April 28, 2009
Monday, April 13, 2009
Reflection on Dieting
a) What information in this unit did you find interesting?
The information that very interesting in this unit is diet: a waist is a terrible thing to mind in sub title is overweight and the Oprah effect. The information in this text that was really funny is based on the statement “if you slim down to yours, you will live longer”. It means, overweight people, they have a short live. It sound hilarious because death not depend on our shape of body but it already stated in our fate the date of our death. Besides that, the information that I found interesting is the experimental doing toward Oprah and the effect on that experiment is uneven easy to lose and easy to gain.
b) Were any concept/tasks/ terminology difficult to understand? Please Elaborate.
The concept that difficult to understand is Bulimia and natural weight. Natural weight makes our sense of our body vigorous defense against weight lose and bulimia as we know one of the disease that had by people that they eat and vomit that food. This concept makes me confuse because the writer tells about natural weight then it included with our sense and then with our biological parent and lastly it join this concept with bulimia. So, I cannot get the point that the writer wants to deliver to me.
The information that very interesting in this unit is diet: a waist is a terrible thing to mind in sub title is overweight and the Oprah effect. The information in this text that was really funny is based on the statement “if you slim down to yours, you will live longer”. It means, overweight people, they have a short live. It sound hilarious because death not depend on our shape of body but it already stated in our fate the date of our death. Besides that, the information that I found interesting is the experimental doing toward Oprah and the effect on that experiment is uneven easy to lose and easy to gain.
b) Were any concept/tasks/ terminology difficult to understand? Please Elaborate.
The concept that difficult to understand is Bulimia and natural weight. Natural weight makes our sense of our body vigorous defense against weight lose and bulimia as we know one of the disease that had by people that they eat and vomit that food. This concept makes me confuse because the writer tells about natural weight then it included with our sense and then with our biological parent and lastly it join this concept with bulimia. So, I cannot get the point that the writer wants to deliver to me.
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